Revisions

(what you wrote) || Revision (how it changed after feedback) || Explanation/Rule (catchy way to remember next time) || it colorful and draw little pictures next to the event. || the more colorful the better! ||
 * Original
 * Genre 1 – interview || fixed my punctuation mistakes || **always revise!** ||
 * Genre 2 – birth certificate || added it so that parents signatures were on it. || add things to make it more realistic ||
 * Genre 3- poem || fix punctuation ||  ||
 * genre 4- timeline || I am going to cut out the dates and make it into a big timeline. I am going to make
 * genre 5- picture with description || I am going to add more information about the Annex and edit some of the sentences || describe!describe! ||
 * genre 6- newspaper article || I am going to fix my spelling and complete sentences || spellcheck away! ||